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Reja: Writing: An essay
Darslik: Laser B1+ SB pp. 20–21 — An essay: ex.1 public transport haqida savollar, ex.2 yozma topshiriq (rasmiy uslub), ex.3 bog‘lovchi iboralar banki (birinchi fikr · qo‘shimcha fikr · sabab va natija · qarama-qarshilik · xulosa), ex.4 namunaviy esse, ex.5 ma’nodosh iboralarni topish, ex.6 xatboshilar vazifasi, ex.7 ikkinchi topshiriq, ex.8 reja tuzish, ex.10 «Check it out!» ro‘yxati; Writing database p. 153, Writing Planner 2 p. 155

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APublic transport: problems and solutions

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🌫️add to(muammoni) kuchaytirmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
More and more cars add to the noise and dirty air in our city.
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💡️offer a solutionyechim taklif qilmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
Electric buses offer a solution to the problem of dirty air.
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🏛️the governmenthukumatLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
The government plans to build three new metro lines.
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👥️the publicxalq, jamoatchilikLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
The new bus station will be open to the public from Monday.
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💰️raise taxessoliqlarni oshirmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
Nobody is happy when the government decides to raise taxes.
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🚌️a servicexizmat, qatnovLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
The night bus service helps people who work late.
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🏠️leave the car at homemashinani uyda qoldirmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
On Fridays my dad leaves the car at home and takes the metro.
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🎟️free of chargebepulqo‘shimcha (mavzuga oid; essedagi «free»)
In some cities, buses for pupils are free of charge.
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⚡️take actionchora ko‘rmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
The city must take action to stop the long queues at bus stops.
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🛑️preventoldini olmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
Speed cameras help to prevent accidents on busy roads.
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🌍️environmental damageatrof-muhitga zararLaser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
Old lorries cause serious environmental damage.

BWriting an essay

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📝️an essayesse, inshoLaser B1+ p.20 ex.2
Our teacher asked us to write an essay about public transport.
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💬️a statementfikr, da’voLaser B1+ p.20 ex.2; p.21 ex.7
Do you agree with the statement that the car changed the world?
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🙂️agree with…ning fikriga qo‘shilmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.2
I agree with you — buses should be free for students.
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🙁️disagree with…ga qarshi fikrda bo‘lmoqLaser B1+ p.20 ex.2
Many drivers disagree with the idea of closing the city centre to cars.
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👁️a point of viewnuqtai nazarLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (2)
In the second paragraph, give reasons for your point of view.
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👍️in favour of…ning tarafdori, …ni yoqlabLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (2)
Most of my classmates are in favour of free buses for pupils.
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🧠️an argumentdalil, asosLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (5)
Each argument in your essay needs a clear example.
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🔑️the main ideaasosiy fikrLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (4)
The first sentence of a paragraph gives the main idea.
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🗣️state your opiniono‘z fikrini bildirmoqLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (3)
In the last paragraph, state your opinion clearly.
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🗂️summariseumumlashtirmoq, qisqacha aytib bermoqLaser B1+ p.21 ex.6 (5)
At the end, summarise your main points in two sentences.

CAdding points

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1️⃣to begin withavvaloLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
To begin with, the metro is much faster than the bus.
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🥇️in the first placebirinchidanLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3; Laser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
In the first place, tickets for students should be cheaper.
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🥈️secondlyikkinchidanLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
Secondly, more buses would mean shorter queues.
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➕️what is moreustiga-ustak, bundan ham muhimiLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3; Laser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
What is more, trains are more comfortable than buses.
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📎️in additionbundan tashqari, qo‘shimcha ravishdaLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
In addition, cycling to school keeps you fit.

DResult, contrast and conclusion

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🔗️because of thisshu sababliLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
Petrol is expensive. Because of this, many families use the metro.
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❄️due to…tufayli, …sababliLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
The train was late due to the heavy snow.
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📈️as a resultnatijadaLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
Fewer people drive now. As a result, the air in the city is cleaner.
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⚖️on the one handbir tomondanLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
On the one hand, taxis are fast; on the other hand, they are expensive.
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🔄️howeverbiroq, ammoLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3; Laser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
Buses are cheap. However, they are often crowded in the morning.
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🌂️despite…ga qaramayLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
Despite the rain, we walked to school.
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🏁️in conclusionxulosa qilib aytgandaLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3
In conclusion, public transport must be cleaner and cheaper.
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🧾️to sum upqisqasi, umuman olgandaLaser B1+ p.20 ex.3; Laser B1+ p.20 ex.4 (model essay)
To sum up, I believe the metro is the best way to travel in Tashkent.

💬Foydali iboralar7 ta ibora — gapirish va yozish uchun (lug‘atga kirmaydi)

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The first thing to take into account is …Avvalo hisobga olish kerak bo‘lgan narsa — …
The first thing to take into account is the price of tickets.
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Another point to be made is that …Yana bir jihat shundaki, …
Another point to be made is that trains are safer than cars.
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This is due to …Buning sababi — …
The roads are full. This is due to the number of new cars.
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To conclude, …Xulosa o‘rnida, …
To conclude, the city needs more buses.
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I am convinced that …Ishonchim komilki, …
I am convinced that free buses would help everyone.
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I would argue that …Fikrimcha, … deb hisoblayman.
I would argue that the metro is the best solution.
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There is no doubt that …Shubhasiz, …
There is no doubt that traffic adds to pollution.

Model essay: people should use public transport more

There is no doubt that traffic adds to pollution. Public transport offers a possible solution to the problem, since many people can be transported in one vehicle. The government has a responsibility to encourage the public to use buses and the underground more. However, there are a number of changes which need to be made.

In the first place, public transport should be made free. The government should raise taxes to pay for the service. If it was free, most people would decide to leave their cars at home and travel by bus or train.

What is more, the service must be clean and reliable. People need to know that they can get to work on time. They also need to know that their journey will be comfortable.

To sum up, I would argue that a clean, reliable service which was free would encourage many people to use public transport. The government should take action now to prevent environmental damage.

Savollar: 1. Does the writer agree or disagree with the statement? · 2. What two changes does she ask for? · 3. How would the government pay for a free service? · 4. Which phrase opens her final paragraph?

✍Bo‘shliqlarni to‘ldiring8 ta gap

________ begin with, public transport is cheaper than a car.
What is ________, the service must be clean and reliable.
In ________ to this, fewer cars mean safer streets.
As a ________, the air in the city is cleaner.
On the ________ hand, the metro is quick; on the other hand, it is very crowded.
To sum ________, I would argue that a free service would help.
Many trains were cancelled ________ to the strong wind.
The city should take ________ to stop traffic jams near schools.

Javoblar

1. To · 2. more · 3. addition · 4. result · 5. one · 6. up · 7. due · 8. action